Alright #PitchWars peeps. I want you to sum up your book in a ONE sentence hook. And I will comment on how I think you can improve it.
To start you off, here's an example from my book:
"When sixteen year old Lucy's brother washes up dead on
their Scottish island, she's determined to find out what happened -
murder, accident, or legend come to life."
Now it's your turn...go!
Tuesday, 5 August 2014
Fiona McLaren is a displaced Scot living on the sunny island of Cyprus. She's an author, scriptwriter, and editor. She works alongside Cornerstones Literary Consultancy U.S., and also takes on freelance editorial work. The most important things in her life are her boys, her family, and her partner...and lots and lots of books! She's represented by the wonderful literary agent Maura Kye-Casella at Don Congdon Associates.